My name is Andres I have 22 years old and love the technology.
I am pursue a degree on Computer science in Tec of Monterrey. I love my school, every day learn new things and I like to share my knowledge with other partners.
I love organizing school events because I learn so much them. I think that the life is beautiful, is true that every day we can have many problems, but resolve them is the best way to gain experience.
In the future, I would like to help students to graduate.
Watch your duplicate entries of your biography (About me).
ReplyDelete"My name is Andres, and I am 22 years old." -- the rest of what follows makes your sentence a run-on. In fact your first "sentence" is about 6 sentences.
I like what you say, but fixing the grammar would make it easier to read and understand.
Thank you for comments, I fixed the problems
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